Many companies now allow staff to work from home. This change has benefits and drawbacks. On the positive side, people save travel time and can manage family responsibilities more easily. Offices also spend less on space. On the negative side, some workers feel lonely and find it harder to separate work and rest. Communication can be slower without face-to-face meetings. In my opinion, a hybrid model is best. Staff can come to the office for collaboration and work remotely for focused tasks. To conclude, working from home is useful if companies support communication and wellbeing.
Examiner notes
Addresses both sides with a clear opinion. Sentences are safe but repetitive; develop examples further.